她来了，她弹了，她征服了

Zhoudan wrote:

刚才收到卓越网送来的CD，打开其中一张CD的说明书，看到这一句：她来了，她弹了，她征服了。我脑子里马上想到对应的英文是：She came, she played, she conquered. 对照英文说明，果然不错。学英语的对这个句型不陌生，都知道是套用：I came, I saw, I conquered。其出处wiki上有详细解释（http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Veni,_vidi,_vici）。问题是，翻译成中文后，普通中文读者有多少人能产生这样的联想，从而产生预期的效果呢？

Zhoudan wrote:

刚才收到卓越网送来的CD，打开其中一张CD的说明书，看到这一句：她来了，她弹了，她征服了。我脑子里马上想到对应的英文是：She came, she played, she conquered. 对照英文说明，果然不错。

Nobuyuki Tsujii (born September 13, 1988) is a Japanese pianist and composer who shared the First Prize at the Thirteenth Van Cliburn International Piano Competition in 2009 in a tie with co-winner Haochen Zhang of China.

Nobuyuki Tsujii was born blind but was gifted with a talent for music. At the age of two, he began to play Jingle Bells on a toy piano after his mother had been humming the tune. He began his formal study of piano at the age of four.

ysun wrote:

当看到 Nobuyuki Tsujii 表演结束，台下观众全体起立，全场响起经久不息的热烈掌声和欢呼声时，当 Nobuyuki 的母亲和钢琴老师一次又一次地分别扶他出来谢幕时，我就想，他获得这样的荣誉完全当之无愧。

ysun wrote:

不过，我估计你们若不“翻墙”就无法看到这令人深深感动的一幕。

Li Jie wrote:

如果原文就是 She came, she played, she conquered. 的话，我觉得做些增补可能会好些，比如：她来了，凭着弹...，征服了...

Zhoudan wrote:

有没有可能
找到中文的另一种句式，能让中国人一看就会心一笑的那种。

ysun wrote:

但一般观众、听众就不一定知道。阳春白雪，和者盖寡。因此，我认为不一定非得刻板地套用原文格式。译文只要能表达“她的精湛表演征服了观众”这层意思即可。

A tricolon (pl. tricola) is a sentence with three clearly defined parts (cola) of equal length, usually independent clauses and of increasing power.

Veni, vidi, vici
— (Julius Caesar)

"I came; I saw; I conquered."
However, the English is not a true tricolon, for its verbs are not all the same length, as is the case in the Latin.

ysun wrote:

如我上面所说，我认为不一定非得套用原文格式。不过，我们可以把这三部分都译为四个字，也许可以达到相近的效果。例如，“精彩表演，出神入化，征服观众”。当然，我并非英语科班出身，平时以科技翻译为主，不擅长于文学、广告方面的翻译。以上拙见权当是抛砖引玉吧！欢迎批评！