Aug 6, 2007 17:46
16 yrs ago
French term

mariant l’éphémère et le pérenne

French to English Marketing Wine / Oenology / Viticulture special collection for Y2K
This appears in a marketing manager’s CV, describing a project she worked on:

Cuvée exceptionnelle (6 grands crus de chardonnay et grandes années millésimées) conçue par XXX pour célébrer le passage à l'an 2000. Mariant l'éphémère et le pérenne XXX à l'idée d'habiller son offre d'une cage en métal argenté dessiné et réalisée par l'Orfèvre Christofle. Série limitée et numérotée.

My creative juices are running dry (perhaps I could use some of this vintage chardonnay!). Any ideas for “mariant l’éphémère et le pérenne”? Thanks in advance!
Change log

Aug 6, 2007 19:14: sktrans changed "Level" from "Non-PRO" to "PRO"

Votes to reclassify question as PRO/non-PRO:

PRO (3): Julie Barber, ormiston, sktrans

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Proposed translations

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1 hr
Selected

In an artful blend of the timeless and the ephemeral,

XXX has opted to present his.....
(agree, must be typo)
another take on it....

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Note added at 14 hrs (2007-08-07 08:15:41 GMT)
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jolly interesting debate below but I shall simply defend my 'artful' ! To me it showed that XXX deliberately (& successfully) conveyed these two notions via his classy pack, i.e. as you say the beauty of the outside and the inside !
Peer comment(s):

agree Sarah Llewellyn : Brilliant!
1 hr
thank you VERY much !
agree Tony M : I think you're very much along the right lines here, though i do just have a slight doubt about the choice of 'artful'
1 hr
agree Silvia Brandon-Pérez
2 hrs
agree veratek : it hadn't occured to me that there may be a mismatch with artful, in any event, stylish, inspiring blend? or blending the timeless and the ephemeral
3 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks to everyone who answered! This was a great discussion. Glad to see there are so many wine enthusiasts. I personally think this suggestion fits best. Very eloquent."
-2
33 mins

combining the ephemeral and perennial/constant

combining the ephemeral and perennial/constant
Peer comment(s):

disagree Josephine79 : using a word for word translation really doesn't work here.
5 mins
disagree Tony M : I'm afraid I have to second Josephine's comment
1 hr
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44 mins

a permanent reminder of the vintage

Not word for word, but giving the idea expressed I'd say something along the lines of:

"In order to leave (the customer with) a permanent reminder of the vintage, XXX was inspired to......"

(I'm assuming, of course that "XXX à l'idée" is a typo for "XXX a l'idée" - otherwise I don't see how the sentence works grammatically at all).
Note from asker:
Thanks Josephine! You are right – that must be a typo. I'll point it out to the client.
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : I see where you're coming from, but I'm afraid this just doesn't get the juices flowing for me!
1 hr
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2 hrs

marrying momentary existence with a suggestion of perpetuity

Hopefully the cage opens - or else it will be more than a suggestion of perpetuity!

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Note added at 3 hrs (2007-08-06 20:52:32 GMT)
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Or since we don't want to imply, as Tony points out, that their wine is just a fleeting pleasure, "To suggest both a rare moment and eternity".
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+4
2 hrs

DISCUSSION ONLY

I've been trying to start off by working out what they mean by this ephemeral / perennial bit — are they simply trying to say that even once you've guzzled down the plonk, you'll still have the nice box to enjoy? I have a sneaky feeling that is really what they mean...

This is one of the reasons I have some reservations about 'fleeting', since although that is of course a true synonym for 'ephemeral', I just can't help thinking they wouldn't like to think of 'dégustation' of their fine cru being regarded as quite such a fleeting pleasure...

I shall be so interested to see what others think about this!

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Note added at 3 hrs (2007-08-06 21:14:38 GMT)
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Oh yes, SKT, I TOTALLY agree that in a wine-TASTING context, 'fleeting' is an entirely appropriate term to use; I just feel faintly uneasy about it as applied to the actual PRODUCT (if that's indeed what they mean). If as I read it the 'éphémère' relates to the experience of enjoying their fine wine, I just feel that 'fleeting' somehow suggests it won't last very long / will be over all too quickly — which doesn't seem to me to feel quite right; surely they'd want people to think "If you buy our wine, you're going to enjoy a long, pleasurable moment drinking it" — in such a context, 'fleeting' seems to me to suggest 'downing it in one'.

Do you see what I mean? It's by no means a strong objection, just a faint unease...
Peer comment(s):

agree sktrans : I think I agree with you about what they mean. But I disagree regarding the word fleeting.
42 mins
Thanks, SKT! // Please see my added note above for a fuller explanation of what I was trying to express...
agree Mark Nathan : I agree that it boils down to a nice box, but since they are French we are probably supposed to credit them with some sort of higher existential notions about Y2K.// I made sure I upgraded well before the event.
55 mins
Thanks, Mark! I wonder if they had Y2K compatibility issues with cork-screws...?
agree Bourth (X) : Right about the box. Was it Pooh who had useful pots for keeping things in?
1 hr
Thanks, Alex! Yes, Pooh... and ME!
agree catinthenet : agreed; 'a` l'idee de'='a l'idee de'.. agreed also with Tony's idea of 'ephemere guzzle/perennial box'.. and i'll pair that to 'ephemere Y2K/perennial millenium'.. And 4 ur traduc; Y not try; "Contrasting FMR and perennial..XXX thought of... "Chin! chin!
3 hrs
Cheers, thx a lot!
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+2
3 hrs

making the instant eternal

Need it matter WHICH instant - when the wine is drunk, when it is offered as a gift, etc. - is concerned?

Whichever instant it is, it will live on as a memory in the horrid silver dust-gathering cagey thingy, be it empty or still full with a full bottle of wine.
Peer comment(s):

neutral veratek : LOL - you're just jealous because you didn't get one ;-) http://www.chez.com/cruse70/an2000.htm // Rachel - great pic match - particularly hideous - LOL
26 mins
agree Rachel Fell : Why did I start thinking of e-Bay when I read the Q. properly... pic. on vera-tech's page is rather like the Gherkin... http://www.copyright-free-pictures.org.uk/london-england/11-...
2 hrs
agree Patrice : Yes!!!
9 hrs
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1 hr

matching the fleeeting with/and the enduring

Suggestion

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Note added at 3 hrs (2007-08-06 21:03:04 GMT)
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Merlot may be in the majority of this crowded cepage, but the wine's fleeting glimpses of sweet black cherries are lost to oppressive tannins that are at ...
www.wineaccess.com/ecommerce/product.tcl?product_id=1002851... - 12k -

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Note added at 3 hrs (2007-08-06 21:04:18 GMT)
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Blind tasting, deconstructing wine into fleeting aromatics and flavors was now the way to evaluate the worth of each bottle. Wine was no longer a culture, ...
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Better wine tasting with optimal temperature, aeration, decanting ...For very old, fragile wine, aroma can be fleeting and volatile. A special decanter is required to avoid over interaction with air. ...
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Note added at 6 hrs (2007-08-07 00:41:20 GMT)
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Tony, this is the fleeting enjoyment of a pleasurable experience. Are'nt most pleasures fleeting? The container will be the permanent reminder of that pleasurable moment
Reference:

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Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : I'm not sure about the 'feel' of the verb 'match', and I feel that 'fleeting' may not have quite the right connotation for this marketing context here. / (Please see note I'm adding to my answer)
59 mins
Tony, just type wine + fleeting and see all the possibilities: fleeting aromas, flavors, fruit etc.
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