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English language (monolingual) [PRO] Social Sciences - Anthropology / homo sapiens | |||||||
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4 | we homo sapiens, who not only have knowledge, but are also aware of that fact |
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4 | homo sapiens, the "wise ones" |
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homo sapiens, who not only know but know we know we homo sapiens, who not only have knowledge, but are also aware of that fact Explanation: or we (collectively as the species) homo sapiens, we not only have knowledge (/the capacity to learn), but we are also aware of that fact (we know that we are capable of knowing). -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 days (2023-07-02 22:26:18 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Forget about it, and come back later - and suddenly it makes sense. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 days (2023-07-02 22:31:12 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- ... what we’ve come to name Homo sapiens, the ones who not only know but know we know, = ... what we’ve come to name Homo sapiens, as we (collectively as the species) homo sapiens, we not only have knowledge (/the capacity to learn), but we are also aware of that fact (we know that we are capable of knowing). |
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homo sapiens, who not only know but know we know homo sapiens, the "wise ones" Explanation: See discussion. On taking another look I realise that this is even more of a mess than first thought Note that your sentence has errors: "Homo sapiens, the ones who not only know but know we know, sometimes called the “wise ones” – in Africa sometime between 350,000 and 130,000 years ago. This is NOT talking about "homo sapiens sapiens" as such (which only started to originate about 160,000 years ago), but rather the earlier human types, including "our Neanderthal cousins (who used tools and lived in groups)" So better to translate as ... "homo sapiens, sometimes called the “wise ones” – in Africa sometime between 350,000 and 130,000 years ago. You could add to clarify We, the early modern humans, "Homo sapiens sapiens" (wise ones aware they are wise) and our Neanderthal cousins used tools and lived in groups (at that time). definition "Homo sapiens sapiens": a subspecies of Homo sapiens where modern human beings belong and are the only extant species of the Homo genus, originated around 160,000 years ago so were living for some time with homo sapiens. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 day 21 hrs (2023-06-30 15:44:21 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- in other words, the 2 types, homo sapiens and homo sapiens sapiens are intermingling after 160,000 years ago. So for the period in question, from 350, 00 to 160, 000 it is really just homo sapiens. Hence you can't use "who not only know but know THEY know" -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 day 21 hrs (2023-06-30 15:51:25 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- typo: 350, 00 to 160, 000 should be 350,000 to 160,000 -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 day 21 hrs (2023-06-30 15:52:05 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- the distinction has to be made based on the time period -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 7 days (2023-07-06 00:54:51 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- Hi Haribert, glad to have helped. It is quite convoluted. I agree that the distinction is often not made these days but in this case, where the author is using the extra phrase, the extra "sapiens" is probably necessary too i.e. Homo sapiens sapiens: "the ones who not only know but know they know" (I still contend that "we" is wrong on a gramatical level) OR the rephrasing I suggested in the Dbox "the wise ones who are aware/know they are wise" since "wise ones" are already mentioned in the text. Anyway, good luck! |
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Reference Reference information: Homo sapiens sapiens is the sub-species that stems from Homo sapiens. Have a look here. I think you have understood it correctly. https://www.biologyonline.com/dictionary/homo-sapiens-sapien... |
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